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Post-production
Screenshots
While editing my pictures I used different tools. I blurred tool to blur the background of the photo as I was not able to remove the background for some of the images. I used the healing spotting tool to get rid of any marks in the images. I cropped some images because things that could not be moved was in the frame. I used these tools to make my image better.
Edited photos
I did the best I could with taking the photos but if covid didnt happen I would have had the proper equipment to take the photos. I staged the area to make the background better. In the future I will make sure that I am in a better position and make sure that the photos turn out better than these ones did.
Audience feed back
Daily Diary
03/03/2021
Today I started to edit my pictures. As I wasn't confident with Photopea which is the software I was using I watched a couple YouTube I did this so that I felt more confidant using photopea which I did feel more confident. When it came to putting my article together I had a problem because Photopea kept crashing so I decided that I was going to use canva to put my article together. I am waiting to get audience feedback on my articles to see if I need to make any changes to them. I changed the size of my page and the layout for my magazine.
I posted my article on reddit yesterday to gain feedback on my articles and what I can improve. I posted in many different groups where I didn't receive any feedback at first. As I was waiting to get feedback from reddit I
sent it out to friends and family to get some feed back. The feed back that I received was very helpful because I was able to make the changes for my work to be better. Some of the feed back suggested that I should change the layout of where the images and the text are positioned. They have also suggested that I change some or the words in my articles and how my articles are structured. I will take the audience feed back and make the changes to my articles to make my article better.
Daily Diary
04/03/2021
Today I posted my first article on reddit yesterday and I did not get any responses so this morning I posted it in different groups that are on reddit. I then sent it out to a couple of friends and family members to get feedback. I then went on to work on my second and my third article and I sent the article out the same way I did with my first article. I am waiting to get feed back on my article so tomorrow I will ge
Before improvements
Final product
Daily Diary
5/03/2021
Today is the last day for post-production. I went on to reddit and checked if I got any feed back for my article and if I received any from friends and family I did this so I can make any changes to my articles. After I checked for the feed back I made all the changes they suggested to my article and uploaded my final product to my website. I made sure that I uploaded everything that I need to upload to my website so that I don't do it last minute. I worked on my diaries making sure they are all there and in detail
Daily Diary
10/03/2021
Today I had to get feedback on my finale product. I sent it out to people that I knew and to the Erin who I interviewed at the beginning of the unit. I did this so I can gain audience feedback of the unit and what they think of my final product. While I was waiting to get feed back I started to do different tasks for Unit 11. I worked on my work experience evaluation and I went on to do my ident. I watched A couple of YouTube videos to see how to crate an ident and to get inspiration of what to do for my ident. I did this because I haven't edited for a while and I did not know what to do for my I dent.
Audience feedback
Audience feedback evaluation
I have received feedback for my double page spreads They have given me both positive and negative feedback for my final product. The second person who gave me feedback on my articles gave me positive feedback mainly said that they liked the content with my articles and that it is easy to relate to. They also said that including the different shows like Bridgeton was a good idea . They liked the colours and the pictures I included in my articles. The first person I went to get feedback gave me negative feedback on my articles they first told me about the grammatical errors in my articles. the person said that I shouldn't have over used the words like so in the articles, that some sentences don't make sense and that there is a lack of narrative . In the feedback the person went on to my design saying that it has lack of colour and that the quality of my images are inconsistent. The feed back that I gained from another person they were saying similar to the feedback that I got before they were saying that they liked that I should repeat words so much. Another person gave me feedback in more detail they liked how my article looked and the text to image ratio part of my article. They went on to say that my articles Does not look professional. They said that I can improve on the layout of my articles as they look like a poster or a billboard. They said that they would read my articles as it does not stand out to them. My product is similar to how I imagined it in my head but I had to make some changes to it due to technical difficulties. In the end it came out better than I thought it would it come out. As I sent my articles to people who are in my target audience I feel like the feed back that I received from them does match the target audience I was aiming for because my articles are relatable. From the comments I received I would change the grammar and I would pay more attention to detail. The feedback has helped me as an individual because I know for next time to make sure that my grammar is correct and that my articles are consistent and making it look more like a magazine and professional .
Evaluation
Daily Diary
12/03/2021
Today is the deadline for unit 12 meaning that everything we did in this unit has to be completed and uploaded to our websites. Today I worked on my final evaluation that I started yesterday and uploaded it to my website. I made sure that I read over it and changed anything that I needed to. I did this so that my evaluation can be the best that it can be. I also went through my website and made sure that everything from my website is all up to date and nothing is missing. I did this so that I can complete unit 12 on time.
Daily Diary
11/03/2021
Today I worked on my audience feedback by taking screenshots and doing an evaluation on the feedback on what was positive and negative on my feedback. I did this to see if my articles meet my target audience needs. I then went on to work on some other tasks . I made sure that everything was uploaded to my website so that when tomorrow comes I can only work on finishing my evaluation. I then went to work on my unit 12 evaluation in detail and making sure that I include everything that I need to include. Tomorrow is the last day for unit 12 so I need to make sure that I have a one to one before 3 tomorrow.
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