I had three different copy editors. One of my editors said that I should explain different areas more as they didn’t understand it. They said that I should put dialogue in commas so that the reader knows that it is dialogue. They said that I should make the title more interesting. They suggested that I should list the trends. My second copy editor said that I didn’t need to change any thing and that they like how I ended the article. The third editor said that I should change the title and the sub heading  are to similar so I should change it. I need to check my spelling and grammar. They suggested that I should read through the sentences. They pointed that I should consider changing the word girl or remove it so that my magazine is suitable for both genders. They said that I should take my time and rewrite one part of the article as it seems rushed. The second article seems to be descriptive so I should add more fun and exciting words. I should end this one differently.